Thick black smoke poured in and I asked my friend (Josiah) “What do you think that black smoke is?” I asked him. “ I don’t know.” he replied. As we were both unaware we made some face mask’s so we can go and find out what that black smoke was. As we went to look for the black smoke we gazed at each other and said at the same time, “What if it’s a deadly toxic smoke?” We eagerly rushed up to high grounds and warned everyone “Hey get out of here there is a deadly toxic smoke coming your way!”
I fell over a mysterious object. My friend (Poiva.) and I were discussing what it was. “What do you think it is?” asked Poiva. “I don’t know. But it looks like a colourful, round crystal.” I replied back. So we went to take a closer look at the object and we were shocked. The colour was blue! When we took a step back and the colour was red! “Wow!” Poiva said in a shock. “What should we do with it?” I asked. “Let’s sell it!” Poiva replied. “We will probably get millions and billions of dollars if we sell it!” my friend said excitedly jumping up and down. “Fine.” I sighed. Then we picked it up and went to the city to sell it.
There was money everywhere and everyone was fighting and shoving everyone. “Why are they fighting?” I asked as I shook my head. “There’s lots of money and where did this money come from anyway?” I asked my friend, Poiva. “I don’t know where it came from but whoever did this did it on purpose so the people can fight over it. And were going to find out.” Poiva said in a cool voice. “Why us?” I asked. “We should just go back home and just mind our own business.” I told him. “We’ll do that after we found out who did this.’’ Poiva replied. “Fine then.” I sighed. Then we went out to find out who released all the money.
I done some work on how to use the right dialouge in a sentence (speech mark's)
I found this pretty hard to do but in the end I finished my work with my friend (Josiah)
thanks for reading.
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